How to Write Sales Letters that Catch Buyers’ Attention


Guest Contributor Chris Blanton is a former serial entrepreneur and business
advisor. He is currently editor of Ingenious Business Guide, a collection of proven practical techniques to ignite business growth and profitability. He can be reached by email and tweets under the handle @cmblanton. His guests posts appear here each Sunday.


In many situations small business owners will need to write to senior executives of large corporations. If you have dealt with them in the past you know how difficult it is to get their attention, particularly when you are trying to sell them. However, it is still possible to get their attention by using the techniques in this post when writing to them.

Make it Short and Sweet
Personally, I favor a short sales letter. I do my best to hook them with the benefit at the beginning, then add a statement why they’ll find my offering valuable expressed in terms relevant to them (time or cost saved, income gained, convenience achieved, et al.) Lastly, I add a guarantee or some type of language offering them peace of mind when they deal with me.
Marketers base direct mail on the premise that their readers have the attention span of a gnat, and you can assume a busy executive is no exception. You can be a superb writer. But unless you use an exceptional marketing message to pique the recipient’s interest, your letter will occupy their attention for the time it takes to drop it into the trash. I want to grab my prospect’s attention as soon as they open the envelope. So I put the marketing message as near the top as I can. That way there’s a better chance I’ll hook them and they’ll read the rest of the letter.
There are a few things you can do to pique your prospect’s curiosity and extend that time period.
By doing so, you’ll have a greater chance of gaining the attention of your prospect. Better still, you’ll gain the attention of the assistant which we shall see is often better.
Coax the Secretary
In Selling To VITO (Very Important Top Officer) , the author asserts it’s a good idea to cultivate a relationship with the assistant. This technique goes even further: it enlists the assistant to help.
By enlists, I mean you will encourage them to set an appointment with his or her boss. Using this concept will increase your chance of getting on their boss’s calendar greatly.
You’ve written your polished custom-tailored sales letter and you’re ready to send it along. First step: find out the first name of the assistant. The name of the assistant is much easier to get than the name of the executive in most cases.
Second step: add a handwritten P.S. at the end of the letter. You want this to stand out so use an appropriate ink depending on the letterhead. I use a red felt tip pen.
The Most Powerful Postscript
The postscript should read: “I shall call you at 2pm on Wed, Sep 23rd. If this time is inconvenient, please have Linda call me at 555-2121 to reschedule.” Linda is the assistant’s name and the time and date are a few days after you expect the boss to receive the letter.
Call at 2pm sharp (or whenever you indicate) and be amazed at how often the assistant puts you right through to the boss. I’ve had CEOs answer the phone themselves when I did this. One notoriously difficult to reach CEO of a large financial services institution told me upon answering the phone that I normally wouldn’t reach him. He said I provoked his curiosity and that he had to know who had used such a novel approach. He didn’t buy from me but he then offered me a position training his sales department.
Why does this technique work? First of all, Linda probably opens her boss’s mail. Seeing one’s own name is flattering; if you see your name on correspondence, wouldn’t you be more likely to forward it? Given the assumptive tone, Linda may presume you’ve already discussed the matter with her boss. Whatever reason, this technique will open many more doors for you.
Don’t be surprised if you get a call from Linda rescheduling your phone call. Also, I’ve had a VP I tried to reach call me out of the blue before the due date. All kinds of things can happen with this technique.
Use it in conjunction with the previous Ingenious Sales Technique to create a devastatingly effective method to reach a decision maker over the telephone.

Do you feel this combination would work for your business? Write a comment letting me know your thoughts.

Comments

  1. Curtis Christensen says

    I find that sales letters are virtually useless until some sort of connection has already been established with the person to whom you are trying to present your product or service.

    Being able to refer to a previous contact by way of introduction is a great way to get the reader’s attention, even if the “attention getter” is simple a reference to an earlier conversation with his/her assistant.

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